Saturday, 4 February 2012

Will it hurt?

‘Will it hurt?’ she asks.

‘Yes.’

‘A lot?’

‘Yes.’

‘Too much?’

‘That depends.’

‘On what?’

‘On who decides when to stop.’

‘It won’t be me?’

‘I fear not.’

‘What if I really can’t bear it?’

‘Then you will have to make a choice.’

‘Between what?’

‘Between your desire to please me and your own comfort.’

‘That’s a hard choice.’

‘Those are the only choices worth making.’

‘Easy for you to say.’

‘Very.’

She thinks.

‘Are you ready?’ he asks.

‘Yes,’ she says after a while. ‘But will you take care of me?’

‘Don’t I always?’

‘I’m scared.’

‘You should be.’

‘It’s going to hurt, isn’t it?’

‘I think we already established that.’

‘Very well.’

He admires the way her chin tilts upwards with determination. Submissive girls are so brave. It makes him want to hurt her all the more. He cherishes her tears.

13 comments:

Alice said...

And she cherishes him for allowing her to give them..

Anonymous said...

From one writer to another I love the elegance of your words (which also make me wet).

I've read through previous posts and you've alighted on many of the things I'm thinking about as I give in to being owned when I am with my lover. This time there are no boundaries and consent is not mine to give. It feels completely like it was meant to be. Thank you for the writing. L

The Rose said...

Wow! I'm wet. That is all.

painspleasure said...

This is one of those love/hate scenarios for me, i get a big buzz out of enduring for my Owners pleasure even though at that particular time it bloody hurts...but i love it.

littleOne said...

very nice, in such a small interraction, the power is intense.

K said...

Lovely ..

faithful said...

magical.... thank you!

mountain girl said...

Very reminicent of our first session...Master was so thoughtful yet honest...and after shedding my blouse and skirt...stood trembling ing naked with my hands on the wall...waiting for our journey to begin......very tough to do while maintaining some decorum..lovely story DD

dancingbarez said...

Beautiful, I hope to find myself in that situation very soon. Being scared can be a wonderfi; thing.

Anonymous said...

I love this, the elegance and honesty of it, the subtle hint of wicked cruelty. *sopping*

nancy said...

So simple and so real.
I love the last paragraph.
Thank you for this spare and beautiful post.

Mediocrity said...

Wonderful and honest. I never tire of reading your blog.

Risque_Xtacee said...

Submission is key. Love this!