Monday, 25 July 2011

A better girl

He pulls her down over his knee, lifts her skirt.

‘I’m going to spank you,’ he says.

‘Yes, sir,’ she says. What else is there to say?

‘But do you know why I’m going to spank you?’

She thinks. ‘Because you want to? Because you can?’

‘Yes,’ he says. ‘But also, because I’m going to make you a better girl.’

She thinks about this. Is she not good already? He’s stroking her bottom gently. It’s soothing.

‘And the harder I spank you,’ he says, ‘the better girl you will become.’

She’s still thinking as he continues to stroke her bottom. He’s now pulled her knickers down. His hand feels delicious against her bare bottom, but she’s tingling too, in anticipation.

‘Are there particular areas of improvement you are looking for, sir?’ she says.

He considers carefully her exact tone of voice. Is there, just faintly, a suspicion of cheekiness? Suddenly he brings his hand down hard onto her right cheek. She squeals. There’s a brief pause, then the other cheek gets the same treatment.

‘What I hope,’ he says, ‘is to purge you of even the slightest trace of brattiness, skittishness, or sass.’

He starts to spank her hard, left, right, left, right. Then he pauses. ‘Do I make myself clear?’ he says.

‘Yes, sir,’ she says breathlessly.

He resumes the spanking, talking over the sound of loud smacks and occasional whimpers. ‘By the time I’ve finished, and this is going to take a good long while, I shall expect your manners to be perfect, and your attitude entirely without fault.’

He spanks her harder, and still harder.

‘Am I getting through to you?’ he asks.

‘Yes, sir,’ says a small, quavering voice. She wonders how long before he takes his belt to her.

13 comments:

Fanny O said...

Such a good thing, that there, no matter what, always will be room for improvement..

K said...

He sounds kinda mean :P heehee

Anonymous said...

So is she better now, or was it only a temporary fix?

Karl Friedrich Gauss

discerningdom said...

It's a work in progress.

Fallen Angel said...

*sigh* very nice!

FeministSub said...

As hot as this scene is, I have to wonder - if the girl in question is naturally sassy, then isn't it a bit sad to take that out of her? Wouldn't a perfectly compliant and polite sub get boring after a while?

Anonymous said...

lol this is so something i would do...I think it's just testing the boundaries, seeing how much you can get away with which is always fun!

discerningdom said...

A perfectly compliant sub? Has such a creature ever existed in this world, for longer than a fleeting moment? One may from time to time, through rigorous training and constant vigilance, bring her close to such a state, only to find that the moment you take your eye off her she reverts to recalcitrance, and the work has to begin all over again. Truly, the work of a dom is never done.

*Serious reader* said...

> only to find that the moment you take your eye off her she reverts to recalcitrance, and the work has to begin all over again.

..because the moment you take your eye off her, she loses too easily that sense of your mastery over her... and in a few more moments, starts to wonder why she should bother at all, if she's not getting your full attention.

FeministSub said...

>>> Truly, the work of a dom is never done.

It's a hard job, but someone's gotta do it. :)

doll said...

Ah Serious Reader,

have you experienced that falling sensation in the pit of your stomach when you realise a Dom is simply not going to measure up to expectations and , dare I say it, boredom sets in?

*Serious reader* said...

*slow grin*
Doll, perhaps I might venture a guess that you must be a sub too? ;-)
"To him who is given much, much also will be expected" - for that reason, a wise dom should know that subs are difficult to please, and tread warily... ;-)
Having said that, one can always give second chances, 'cos meeting the mark goes both ways.. :-)

redheadedsub said...

Oh, doll, I have experienced that precise feeling and it is horrible.

Lovely post, Sir.

~red